Tuesday, 17 March 2015

Slice of Life 18


Positive Comments

Last week, I promised those students who didn't receive a shout out in my Insomnia post that I would comment on their blogs this week. And, even though the teacher in me really, really, really, wants to remind each of you to edit your work, again, I will limit myself to only positive comments.

Sharika: Hugs - Very fun post. I definitely want to hug wizard’s magic! :)
Lyutha: Wonderful post about coffee. I love the extended metaphor. Coffee is a charger!
Anirudh: Great post about running. I felt like I was on the track with you.
Sean: Is it wrong that I loved your post on Writer’s Block? Excellent word play, and you characterized your teacher perfectly.
Gabe: Great post on hunting - this is some of your best writing this year!
Aneesa: Loved your post on swimming. Good use of sensory language.
Sacha: I agree, dogs are the best friends a person could ever have.
Annie: Great poem on Typo. I could feel your excitement.
Justina: I loved your post personifying the pen. Beautiful writing.

Romane: Wonderful post on the beach. You made me long for a holiday.
Jae Min: I love pizza too.
Arjun: I can tell friendship is something you value deeply.
Nanami: Your “Currently, I am in the classroom” post captures our quick writing activity perfectly.
Keivon: Your writing without sight post is one of your best.
Gabby: Your Ode to Homework made me smile.
Annalyse: I very much enjoyed your post on the bubble experiment. Great imagery.
Ariz: Thanks to you, I am craving pancakes.
Ayari: I prefer hamsters to mice. :)
Damiaan: I liked Jack and the Mountain – You have the beginnings of a compelling story.
Na Kyung: Perfect title for the post about your brother. It hooked me from the start.

Keep up the great slicing everyone!

25 comments:

  1. Here is my SOL #18 - http://sjoly21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  2. Here is my SOL #18 about fun dip--http://aarnett21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  3. Here is my SOL - 18 about a color.
    http://xruge21iskl.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  4. Here is my SOL 18 about a 'special' moment: http://sekram21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  5. Here is my SOL 18 about a scary story I wrote:
    http://labid21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  6. This is my SOL 18: http://mchong21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  7. Here is my SOL 18
    http://dschiet21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  8. This is my SOL 18 about colours: http://mbrueckner21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-challenge-18-colour.html

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  9. This is my SOL 18 about 'Colour Memory'- http://sgustini21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18-colour-memory.html

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  10. This is my SOL 18 about "Colour Description" - http://nkim21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  11. This is my SOL 18- http://asato21iskl.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  12. My SOL #18: http://theperceptualshift.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18-2015.html

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  13. http://zlundgren21.blogspot.com/2015/03/sol-18-colour-stories.html?view=sidebar

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  14. Here is my SOL 18, a memory of a summers day!
    See if you can guess the colour I incorporated!

    http://aoctoman21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18-fine-summers-day.html

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  15. Here is my SOL 18 about the color activity we did :) - http://kfoudy21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  16. Here is my SOL 18 about the color activity we did :) - http://kfoudy21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  17. Here is my SOL 18
    http://kmorita21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  18. My SOL 18 about money http://apuri21iskl.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-day-18.html

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  19. My SOL 18 about a little something to everyone...~ http://kirahola21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18-sincere-apology.html

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  20. My SOL 18 about War - http://gchivers21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-challenge-day-18.html

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  21. This is my SOL 18- http://rzanolini21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  22. My sol 18 http://kfaizi21.blogspot.hk/2015/03/slice-of-life-18.html

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  23. This is my Slice of Life 18, short poems about my see-food diet, and social media:
    http://dnanavati21iskl.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18-short-poems.html

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  24. Here is my Slice of Life 18 - http://amehmood21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18-got-my-laptop-back.html

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  25. Here is my Slice of Life 18 - http://amehmood21.blogspot.com/2015/03/slice-of-life-18-got-my-laptop-back.html

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